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IORI666
26/02/2009, 19h17
""1couplie"":

__why !!!

_you had to see me cry.

_you thought it's worth the try.

_to see me fall on to ma knees.

__why !!!

_what have i ever donne to you.

_all i did is loving you.

_is that my crime.

""refraine"":

_Now i'm donne with good and beliving.

_i'm through with taking not but giving.

_the only one i'll not forgive is you.

_I had nothing else worth living.

_and you left me wounded there n bleeding.

_so much pain but why can't i forget you.

""2 couplie"":

__why !!!

_you had let me die.

_no one heard you but i.

_gave you my heart . (to live in me)

__why !!!

_all i ever asked you to.

_was only to let me through.

_to make you proud.


c les paroles d'une chanson ke jai composée , j'aimerai lire vous crétik svp + je suis nouveau.. merci

momo.05
07/03/2009, 15h47
:73: :67: :guitar: :ben2: :bighair:

sefaxe
07/03/2009, 16h00
trop fort IORI666....j'adore....

y a-t-il un producteur par ici ???


:)

momo.05
07/03/2009, 16h17
arretes de rire sefaxe!:rolleyes:





:73: tu danses?

sefaxe
07/03/2009, 16h21
haha momo. Ok.
:73: :25:

momo.05
07/03/2009, 16h22
:mrgreen: :mrgreen:

dezdek,dezdek...............:73: :mrgreen:

sefaxe
07/03/2009, 16h25
seb't stah seb't stah seb't stah :guitar:

momo.05
07/03/2009, 16h26
:72: :72: grand fou va!

IORI666
18/03/2009, 19h48
je sais pas si c'est un compliment ou pas mais merci je croi!!!
et c'est une chanson metal !!pour le producteur bien sur :D

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